I would like to respond to all comments, but I'm not for that inspiration. In any case, I would like you to the OneShocie "House" threw a look at the figure Chijo. I thought wytknie that someone got an error, or omission of the cause and effect relationship, which appeared in connection with this character as an escape and Naruto. Well, unfortunately, nobody paid attention to it, which is a pity. So you hover on it.
So all what I wanted to show begins when Naruto runs away from the hospital before Itachi. London is a big city, so what is the chance that you will re-haired blondaska? Exactly almost none, especially since it does not, he went to his residence. And here comes the character Chijo. An old lady living in London, but speaking in French and understands English? Until that starts a conversation with an unknown boy and takes him to the hospital. But this is not the end of the strange events in which the main character has not seen unusual, and the apparent observer should see them. Well, the hospital did not ask for documents boy. Strange is not it? Even stranger is the sentence Chijo, where he mentions his parents Japończykach. That nation is learning English, so logically you would like to have their child knew the language.
Well, and finally the best. Itachi's departure comes after Chijo. Have you noticed now it?
Chijo form in this story is somewhat controversial. I can tell about their findings in the comments.
Returning to the two main characters. The creation of Naruto has helped me in a sense, my view of the world. The boy wants to be independent and honest as you noticed. And there are obviously some unresolved mysteries related to it, which give it quite a realistic character. After all, nobody does not show all their qualities and the reasons for their behavior. How do you think of how such a trauma for him after hearing the names of the Uchiha?
blondaska general character was supposed to be real, but not popular. Can I succeeded Review alone. The boy clearly does not like London, but prefers to live in difficult conditions than return to their homeland. And here comes the second question: Is this reaction is not too exaggerated? Or maybe its because of the escape but said consisted of some other? But obviously he gives us his love for Japan.
Delving even further in the text. You can specify a few quirks hero, but that everyone let the looks.
Turning to Itachi Uchiha. The first thing that strikes the eye, as he rightly pointed out, is that it works for Minato. Just like in life does not specify the good and bad here. It is intertwined. I was hoping nobody would say that Minato did with this evil. It is one of the most important people in the Yakuza - the fact that somewhere but it is said that bad? It is not only a subjective assessment of the blonde, who just do not want to have anything in common with the mafia and perhaps guided by the stereotypical approach to this issue. This is to see. But he says that he lived well. There is no mention anywhere of mistreatment by his father. Nay, he could waste his money.
Returning to a brunet. Since working for Minato, works for the mafia. Kind of logical, but are you sure? Did he mention anywhere that he is a member of the mafia? Correct me if I'm wrong (and I may be wrong, because I do not know by heart the whole story), but he only speaks about his father blonde. From what you can draw various conclusions. For example, it is an employee or a detective Namikaze. If it is not clearly stated, it can not be ruled out any option.
Passing to the main topic OneShot. In the end it does not look like yaoi. I wished there was not any love. I know that Valentine's Day is associated with this, but I wanted to make it a joy to read a story in every situation. So the love is gone and everybody sees. There is only a reaction to the second body and desire. How often in life people are guided by just lust than love.
And look what it does Naruto! Are satisfied, and then disappears. And there is also a contradictory feelings. Someone who has hurt? Or maybe no one has been hurt? Maybe just one person caused a fury in the second joy? Or both persons have what you wanted? Last does not make sense? Why not? Naruto got a second chance to escape, and Itachi reason to return to their homeland. No? No problem, everyone has their own feelings. But it is worth looking at it from several points of view.
And finally, the last sentence meant for Naruto. This is information that should appear at the beginning, but it does not appear. Treatment is intended. The sentence " most important thing in front of him, away from dirty tentacles Japanese mafia "- a clear indication of the motivation blonde. In addition, the opinion of the Mafia and the Japanese approach to life. And all this in one sentence, I do not believe me? Read assessing several times from different angles.
And now this information at the end. It is possible that it will continue, but more likely it is that you get OneShot, who will be the next event in the life of the blond. I hope that I can write it so that it can be read without knowledge of the "tenement".
Yours, and I hope you are not angry that it was not another note. Next will probably tomorrow and will be "Lost Hopes" or "The darkness of Solitude." It depends on what I finish, because the moment of slack in my vein.
Bye.
Hilisme.
If you do not find the road itself, sets it ... "L'histoire est un roman qui a ete, Le roman est une histoire qui aurait pu être. "History is the story of what happened, story-story that could happen. 
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